I like your color choices and the ink drawng. I wish there's something happening in the background and the format of the text be a little more different (like how you did last time.)
An on going picture book of linked blogs. The idea is sound, but certainly it could use some refinement. Aside from some brokenlinks, the ability to "Go Back To Main" or simply even "Move on to Next" would be nice, since point of clicking on the picture was not quite clear. I only found the rest by accident alone, and that didn't seem like proper design.
Overall the illustrations are quite solid, but perhaps posting all parts of the story from End to Beginning on just one blog might have been more constructive? Consider my comments if you ever desire to refine the piece at a later date.
Upon further review after the links were repaired, the actually animation itself is a close to a solid animatic in itself, as the previous blog-links were the story board alone.
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I like your color choices and the ink drawng. I wish there's something happening in the background and the format of the text be a little more different (like how you did last time.)
I like how the links are used. I think it works well with the idea of netart
I enjoyed the illustration. i also enjoyed the plot line. though the loading of each image began to take away from the piece itself...
An on going picture book of linked blogs. The idea is sound, but certainly it could use some refinement. Aside from some brokenlinks, the ability to "Go Back To Main" or simply even "Move on to Next" would be nice, since point of clicking on the picture was not quite clear. I only found the rest by accident alone, and that didn't seem like proper design.
Overall the illustrations are quite solid, but perhaps posting all parts of the story from End to Beginning on just one blog might have been more constructive? Consider my comments if you ever desire to refine the piece at a later date.
Upon further review after the links were repaired, the actually animation itself is a close to a solid animatic in itself, as the previous blog-links were the story board alone.
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